Looks nice and very funny, 

as others mentioned, the lighting looks improvable, the contrast between
light and shadow should be stronger, so you could reduce the ambient, make
the main light source brighter and maybe add a fill light.  

The bricks look great, but the water is too bright IMO, at that angle
there should be not so much reflection and it also seems to have some
ambient/diffuse finish.  Maybe also try variable reflection.

The grass looks somehow wrong in scale in comparison to the bricks, but
that's not so important.

Christoph

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